Accident

by Nuh   Oct 15, 2007


Gazing at the dark clouds
right after you torn my life apart

and now i find myself looking at clear blue skies

After knowing that you trying to find a way into my Broking heart

A second later i open my eyes
finding my lips on yours, touching....

so i close my eyes again
took a deep breath
and accidentaly i took yours,
suddenly you fell on your knees begging me please to give you another chance.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marylou L

    Your meaning for the poem is very unique. i'm saying thats bad, i like it. My fav. part is this line:
    "So i close my eyes again
    took a deep breath
    and accidentaly i took yours"
    its so vivid in my mind...keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    It is very good. How about " accidentally took yours" or " took yours" for a title.
    Keep up the writing.