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by Kris
It is very good. How about " accidentally took yours" or " took yours" for a title. Keep up the writing.
by Marylou L
Your meaning for the poem is very unique. i'm saying thats bad, i like it. My fav. part is this line: "So i close my eyes again took a deep breath and accidentaly i took yours" its so vivid in my mind...keep up the great work. 5/5