Comments : Accident

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    It is very good. How about " accidentally took yours" or " took yours" for a title.
    Keep up the writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marylou L

    Your meaning for the poem is very unique. i'm saying thats bad, i like it. My fav. part is this line:
    "So i close my eyes again
    took a deep breath
    and accidentaly i took yours"
    its so vivid in my mind...keep up the great work. 5/5