by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Oct 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
What's up boy? |
by Dan
Hmm well.... It's very good, and the flow is ok, but not what it could be. Also the poem lacked something... I feel it could have had more feeling, but thats just my opinion. |
by Polaroid
LOVE IT |
by Adelle
You have a very unique way of wrighting for me I found your poem a little to long and you also put tou it should have been you. |
by xxSuicidalxx
Wow...that was a long poem...but i liked it! flowed very well and beautiful..very sweet 5/5 |
by Fsams
Very beautiful and I love long poems. This one flows very well and I just remembered my poem called"Hide it conceal it...." U could check it! :) |