by Lyndsay Kalyta Oct 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
She used to stumble in the darkness |
by browneyezz
Awww this was a great poem great job |
by MyEscape
I LOVE this poem! You are very consistent in the structure. Not only did you switch from she/now the whole poem but each line would contrast from the previous one. I loved the line about her surrendering in his sight. Beautiful! Thanks for your comment on my poem. You really took the time to share your thoughts and it was MUCH appreciated! |