Tis a very good glosa verse jenna dear, love how you portrayed this story the way you did, flows perfectly, another 5/5 from me!!! keep them coming babe and congrats on 500!!!!

WoW! you never cease to amaze. your talent grows with each poem. I like your rhyming better, but your non-rhyming is VERY good too. Congrats on reaching your 500th poem and keep going!
*ME*

I loved this.
i love the form too. i'll have to try that.
5/5

WINNING POEM<3

I really need to try this form. I've saying over and over that I will, and I've yet to get round to it... but it looks fun!

This poem was just amazing. I'm kind of speechless, I don't know what to say.

"I'm gonna show him what a little girls made of." - There should be an apostrophe after in "girl's".

:] Overall: wonderful.