Hmm not very good poem there, here's y, n this is subjective cuz my personal opinion:
too short n dunno y cudn't take wat u were sayin seriously. i mean that the feelings u describe in there don't really sound real, cuz it's too much.. but i'm maybe wrong maybe this guy is all of this to u, n if he is, then he's lucky to get that kind of poem from u. maybe a bit harsh but rated u 2/5