by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Oct 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Whiskey tears drown away sorrow, |
["At least fake it," She slowly sighs,] -- You don't need to capitalise the 's' on "she". |
by Woe
I really loved this poem. i would have given you first and second place but that probably wouldnt have been fair huh? well 5/5 definately. i love your poems |