My heart is like a castle,
So big, so many hassles,
Servants that opens doors,
And a queen that the king adores...
My heart is like a broken record,
Has one song that no one can afford,
Plays the same melody again and again,
Until you hear the love I'm trying to attain...
My heart is like a dictionary,
Has a lot of words to describe,
How much you mean to me...
My heart is like a museum,
Has a history that I want to resume,
Permanent pictures that were carved,
So I won't forget that you're the girl I've always loved...
I don't even know what I could possibly say that could begin to sum up how I feel about this piece.
The similies you used gave the overall piece a very powerful effect while the flow was flawless throughout the entirte piece and the imagery beautifully portrayed.