by Goran Rahim Oct 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
In my dream, |
This poem is very sweet. i enjoyed readin this very much.. its a thoughtful poem. keep it up |
Thats soooo super cute! awwe. so true dude. 5/5 :) |
Awww this is so beautiful... i love this poem... i like the way you put the ending... |
This was simple, but good and very sweet. I loved the structure of this poem and it was wonderfully written and also flowed really well. I also like how you repeated "I love you because". That was extremely effective in capturing your readers attention. |
by Avan Ahmad
I love the ending, "I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU" also its true because love has no reason you just love someone because they make you feel good and they make you smile for no reason. dast xosh 5/5 |