by Tammie
You have written better than this, but for a simple love poem, I think it was very sweet. Sometimes poems don't have to be completely indepth to mean, or say a lot, and I think this is one of those. Love has no reason, you're right on that one. You love someone for who they are, and you said that in this. The flow was good and your emotion clear. A good piece. |
by Gasttlee
I don't see why the ratings are somewhat low. This is a beautiful poem! 5/5 |
by Mousie
Awww i need to show that one to ross. if that was written for me, i'd probably cry, it was beautiful and i loved it. wonderful job beautiful poem. |
by freshta
True, love has no reason |
by Avan Ahmad
I love the ending, "I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU" also its true because love has no reason you just love someone because they make you feel good and they make you smile for no reason. dast xosh 5/5 |
This was simple, but good and very sweet. I loved the structure of this poem and it was wonderfully written and also flowed really well. I also like how you repeated "I love you because". That was extremely effective in capturing your readers attention. |
Awww this is so beautiful... i love this poem... i like the way you put the ending... |
Thats soooo super cute! awwe. so true dude. 5/5 :) |
This poem is very sweet. i enjoyed readin this very much.. its a thoughtful poem. keep it up |