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by Toni May 6, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Water flows through my burnt hands As I sit here and think Will I ever reach safe land Or slowly start to sink This cool water soothes the pain Numbing me until Icy streams flood my veins And so begin to kill Chilling blades crawl up your spine To suffocate within Life and death intertwine So drowning can begin This water now is deceptive Your enemy and friend Draining your life through a seive Whilst the pain, it does mend Rivers fill my broken heart A glacier in my lungs Now upon my soul it starts Until it is done My eyes see a blurry torent I gasp my last breath As underwater now I'm sent To wait for my death
by Toni
Thanku hun! xx
by TaTy
wow i loved your poem, and i think it was great, check mine out if you get a chance and let me know what you think. Keep writing i love to see more of your work. i give you a 5=)