I thought this started off really well, you have all the emotions there and the flow is easy to follow

"To see who or what brakes your heart,"

^ 'breaks' your heart

"Your straight
To be the one you could count on,"

^ I didn't get this line, straight what?

"But most important
Your heart
To be the reason your alive."

^ But that last line was gorge and really set off the poem perfectly.
You have the makings of a great one here, well done

*Gem*

Amazing

Great poem but one line i didnt really understand is,

"your striaght
To be the one you count on"

care to explain what that means ??