I Love You Secretly...

by xXMohawkedMahemXx   Oct 16, 2007


A close friends girlfriend
Who you loved to see
You hugged her closely
Yet held onto me

I felt so amazing
Yet always an outcast
When she found out
I hid behind a mask

Im sorry i fell for you
Im sorry i cared
I didnt mean to hurt you
But i felt so scared

I loved you so much
You told me the same
When she found out
I felt so ashamed

Im sorry i loved you
Im sorry she cried
This relationship has
Now officially died.

An affair gone wrong...

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  • 16 years ago

    by x0XBloodyFantasyX0x

    Very nice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    That was a great poem and i'm sorry you had to go through that

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    A beautifully written poem.....i love the way your poems flow....there simple yet have a powerful message.....Im sure a lot of people could relate to this.....i definetly loved the last part
    "Im sorry i loved you
    Im sorry she cried
    This relationship has
    Now officially died"
    your an excellent writer...keep it up..ill be looking forward to reading more:)

    p.s-btw thank you for commenting on my poem....it means a lot:)

  • 16 years ago

    by BlEeDiNg FoR tHe OnE i LoVe

    Its good i like it....check out my poems....comment honestly....PLZZZ

  • 17 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Yeah why did you walk away from it??
    i mean you still have the chance to make everything right and if this person dont want to become a friendm

    but its really good

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