by Pete Oct 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Walked out on me, doubtfully, head for the door. |
by Cella Bella
Wow, another very powerful read. This entire piece is word so well nad the emotion is very raw and quite captivating. This is an amazing acrostic. You did a great job with this form. 5/5 |
by *Charisma*
Very interesting piece. Nice job on this one. I like how you wrote from another's perspective. It's a sad piece though. |