Wow, you created so powerful and dark atmosphere in this piece, it is very effective from the beginning to the end. Your descriptions in it are truly great. I like the form that you picked, you did amazing job on this poem.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Powerful poem, repetition of the word -whispers- on the end made a great effect. Well done, this piece is short but it still has amazing rhythm. I like the way that you wrote it.

Not super spine chilling but perfect, mysterious and mind-thrilling. wonderful write willow...captivating my mind to get caught up in the wonder of those wandering spirits. short but a visual treat for the eyes and the mind! 5/5

I love this form and I believe you pulled it off really nicely. The word choice were written in such depth and held so much effect within each one. The repetition was effective and again you have created such an eerie atmpshere. Loved this also. ~Mel