by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror Oct 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I can't be happy because I'm sad |
by AMoreMIo
Ha well i thought it was a quite good little poem..your emotions.. were said like it is |
by Nix
This poem isn't good at all. Rhyming is forced and you didn't actually expressed emotions on the right way. It doesn't seems to deep, and repetition of the words-I can't...- leaves really bad impression. |