I can't be happy

by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror   Oct 16, 2007


I can't be happy because I'm sad
I can't even leave the bed
I can't be happy, pain is the only thing I ever had!

I can't be happy I'm so confused!
I feel the sorrow, I'm not amused!

It looks like I hav everythimng
but I live in hell!

I can't be happy,
that's all I'll tell!

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  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Ha well i thought it was a quite good little poem..your emotions.. were said like it is
    -alicia

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem isn't good at all. Rhyming is forced and you didn't actually expressed emotions on the right way. It doesn't seems to deep, and repetition of the words-I can't...- leaves really bad impression.