Comments : I can't be happy

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem isn't good at all. Rhyming is forced and you didn't actually expressed emotions on the right way. It doesn't seems to deep, and repetition of the words-I can't...- leaves really bad impression.

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Ha well i thought it was a quite good little poem..your emotions.. were said like it is
    -alicia