by gack60 Oct 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
What happens if one day u wake up and find, |
Brilliant. it brings to light things alot of people forget to remember. Great flow and use of language. i just love this, it's so good. |
by Cella Bella
Again, great rhyme and flow, you have a real talent for those two. I love meaning in this piece. Very original. Great write. 5/5 |
So true in so many ways. The structure as well as the rhymes where great. You are an amazing poet, keep up the great writes. |
by Pete
I love this piece, not just because the flow and rhyme structure are solid as a rock but also because it has a true meaning. |