Stanza 2 has an ABCB rhyme pattern that doesn't tie in with this piece. A poem is either rhymed or unrhymed, combining them both sometimes works if done with extreme care, but it this case it just didn't gel, not for me anyway. Other than that, this is a moderately good piece. A little work and a quick edit to tidy it up would only serve to improve this.

Keep read more, one step at a time. Don't give up. You can do it. When I start writing, I wasn't good at all.

This is catchy. I love how you made such an amazing imagery here. 5/5

This poem is really wonderful because it was written by a beautiful mind.