Well, it's a damn crying shame that this won't get read as much as the Love poems on this site, it seems that if you write about society/life no one wants to know.
This is a great piece of work, shows a great use of vocabulary thoughout and employs a very unique rhyming structure.

"You see a child will always question where, how and why?
But an adult just accepts that a bird can fly."
^^Love these lines, it's so true! As adults we know that we know everything, so we take what we "know" for granted.

Another wicked poem mate.
Keep it up.
[funf/funf]
~Pete.

I really like this one, it is very deep and true, you wrote it on the interesting way, it is so original. I like the message of this and atmosphere in it is fantastic. Well done!

Wonderful write. I loved your choice of words. Keep up the great work, you have a lot of talent.

Peace, Joe

Wow, I loved this! Great message and meaning. The structure is really great and works well with this piece. Another 5/5.

marcella

This is brilliant. i love your style, adding you to my favourite authors list, so please keep writing. you have such talent for writing, and i love the subjects and topics you touch on.
DnB

You have talent,I like this poem
It's in my favorites.

Keep it up