by Mousie Oct 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
My heart beats |
I thought it was a bit long but for me I was interested the whole time because I can relate to this in many ways. The imagery in the words were fantastic and once again you've done a great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Goran Rahim
This was good dear, you have alot of great emotions and word, the only suggestion i have is to try to break down the feelings into different category or just choose one poetry style to work it through, it will be the greatest poem. |