This was good dear, you have alot of great emotions and word, the only suggestion i have is to try to break down the feelings into different category or just choose one poetry style to work it through, it will be the greatest poem.
keep it up like always dear, you ae truly talented.

I thought it was a bit long but for me I was interested the whole time because I can relate to this in many ways. The imagery in the words were fantastic and once again you've done a great job 5/5 GG23