Comments : I don't need you any more!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Wow excellent flowing. Please keep writing. Hmmmm...... 4/5?
    I love this part
    "But things have changed and so have I
    I no longer believe you ,its lie after lie"
    P.S
    If you want actually spell out the word.
    But in some cases it just makes it flow better if you don't. This is one of those cases.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Actually make it 5/5. I just saw that it was under internet slang ,my bad. Love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Excellent poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    That was great. Powerful emotion and strength.

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You showed strength and courage in your poem ,a little sadness and regret. Good job with just a little editing it would be a fantastic poem Good job anyway
    5/5