by Gasttlee Oct 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Reason. |
by Krathia
Not much to say baout this, except that it was very simple, yet very bold. The only thing I didn't like was "In order to stand correct," |
I like it... it is true but my honest opinion is i wish you could have worked what respect meant to you into a longer poem. not just a few words per stanza. you know... sorry.... |
by Marc Ortiz
Oh cool I guess this is an Acrostic poem? Well I love the last lines :) good job. |
by Sweet lig
Hmm seems same w/the ist one i read,but though this one i think i've got lots of lesson lol......... what i mean is.. all the words u had written in here are such the way of i realized a lot of things.. thanks for sharing im truly understand ... it was great i love the message 5/5 |
by Dark Secrets
Nice one ... Thats exactly why I love our physics teacher! |