We need to talk a little more i think, we have stopped our great conversations....

:grin. remember that? well i'll chat later. nice poem. dark and deep. too deep for me,

5/5 David

Wow... every stanza is absolutely breathtaking. Whole poem is written excellently, with fantastic and so vivid imagery. It is so unique and it holds so many emotions. I can relate to this piece. I like your choice of words in the whole poem and the original atmosphere that you created.
My favorite stanzas are the firs and the second, they're truly outstanding.
5/5 from me

Maybe I can take a stab at understanding you.. This poem kind of appears to me as indecision of who you are and who you want to be.

but it was a good story, and touching altogether. Out of all of your new work.. This is my favorite. And I liked the title, as well, simple as it may be. You did a goob job here. And you wrote only for yourself. i like that.

I thought that the poem was written very well and the flow and word choice were both fantastic. I also thought the meaning was very deep and I could relate to the words very well. Excellent job with this piece 5/5 GG23

A great write I certainly thought. The flow was great the description was very gripping and would love to talk to you about the core story behind the words great read Plot121

Wow I LOVED it you should write a book, it was just so genius you are definatley going on my fav's list, i can't get over how great that was

Im not gunna be all like: oh, i totaly git you, ur so talented, we should be best friends!: oh yeah, im not mocking anyone lol. anyway, as always, a real pleasure to read your poems, i do feel a little bit of this "deaper meaning" u spoke of, but im not gunna let on in case others copy my work *cough!*

i loved it

10/10