by Birgit Oct 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is just something I wrote.. when I was feeling down. I was actually just singing something random, and than I wrote it down. And this came out. |
by Kalee
For somethin that you just came up with in a short time, it is really good. the flow and wording were really good. 5/5 |
by cass
Gr8 poem very deep.....nice! !!! ^_^ |
by Marc Ortiz
I really like the opening line of this poem - it's really strong. Just like you said in the beginning(sp) it came from your heart, well done. |
Birgit! |