That was a long but soo good poem. Love it. You really got me there, right into my heart . That was soo expressfull and much emotions. But I hope that never happend?

Jenni...you rock!! This was long but kept my intrest throughout. Usually pieces this long lose their rhythem and stray...but this was put together well and you can feel the emotion through the entire piece. Great job!!

I think its time you kicked Ana out of your head.... she is causing problems within in this write. Makes me sad to think that she is emotionally and physically draining on this person. At least I do hope this is not real with you.... anyways, as always, very well written, emotional and heartfelt.

Grils hating their body and going on extreme diets, which sometimes get totally out of control and end up becomming an eating disorder--THAT kind of thing always breaks my heart, it brings me to tears everytime. I don't know what is it, but a girl who thinks she has to be skinny to be beautiful, it's just so sad. There's so much more than what you see in the mirror. So I do so very much hope you're not heading down that path. It's a lonely road darling, and that light at the end of the tunnel you keep hoping you'll see soon..well, it just never really becomes visible.
The poem touches me in ways I can't even explain. It's amazing. =]
--Viola

Grils hating their body and going on extreme diets, which sometimes get totally out of control and end up becomming an eating disorder--THAT kind of thing always breaks my heart, it brings me to tears everytime. I don't know what is it, but a girl who thinks she has to be skinny to be beautiful, it's just so sad. There's so much more than what you see in the mirror. So I do so very much hope you're not heading down that path. It's a lonely road darling, and that light at the end of the tunnel you keep hoping you'll see soon..well, it just never really becomes visible.
The poem touches me in ways I can't even explain. It's amazing. =]
--Viola

Ah nice poem touched my heart real feelings

Amazing,totaly how you feel when ana has consumed you