by gack60 Oct 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Who am I? am i life or am i death? |
SO true. I love your poetry, you touch on some really interesting topics. personification in this piece is brilliant. I really like your style. |
by Cella Bella
"dreams" shouldn't be plural there. It doesn't sound right. Great concept, I like point of view. Nonetheless a great write. 5/5 |
Yet again a great write. Short and to the point. Keep up the amazing work. |
by Pete
Really like this idea, whiting a poem through the eyes of Fear. I would have liked to see this a little bit longer .. although you get alot across in just a few stanza's. |