Fallen Relationships

All you have to do is be patient love will come. It always does. You did a really great job on this one. I have no complaints at all. It was beautfiully written.

my fav lines:

It ends the same way every time I try
And my heart keeps getting stolen

Great Read

5/5

I need someone
A person who'll show me the way
Lost in the endless sands of desperation
Waiting for one glory day...

loved the last stanza!! good poem btw. i love how you write about how you feel about this subject, but i didnt think the part about your friends didnt really fit. idk, it could just be me. i give ya a 4/5 great job!

Aww sad! i love it though.. it shows the endless thought patterns of many teenagers. great job putting that to words.. i really liked it! keep it up!

Expressed Clearly. The flow was excellent, the word choice good.
The poem itself written on a relatable topic.

' Keep your head up, and keep searching, your day will come when you are blessed by true love'

--Elly.

Sad, yet very awesome. I loved this poem a lot. 5/5

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