This is a poem many can relate too. Always looking for your one love. The flow was kinda rocky but the emotion was amazing so I give it a *5/5*

"Have two beautiful friends
Both are smart and kind
One has a guy
And with the other I can't bind"
^fave stanza :]

Oh, how I can relate. I have been trying to do a poem like this for the longest, but you write with strength and passion here! This deserves a 5 without a doubt!

Hey great poem i love it!!!! this deserves a 100%
I love all your stuff you are a great poet!
Ally :) ^^

I'm sure everyone can relate to this some how, now or, unfortunately, inthe future. The emotion was expressed well here. It added a lot of deoth to the piece. 5/5

marcella

Wow I am With you there =[

Sad, yet very awesome. I loved this poem a lot. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Expressed Clearly. The flow was excellent, the word choice good.
The poem itself written on a relatable topic.

' Keep your head up, and keep searching, your day will come when you are blessed by true love'

--Elly.

Aww sad! i love it though.. it shows the endless thought patterns of many teenagers. great job putting that to words.. i really liked it! keep it up!

I need someone
A person who'll show me the way
Lost in the endless sands of desperation
Waiting for one glory day...

loved the last stanza!! good poem btw. i love how you write about how you feel about this subject, but i didnt think the part about your friends didnt really fit. idk, it could just be me. i give ya a 4/5 great job!

All you have to do is be patient love will come. It always does. You did a really great job on this one. I have no complaints at all. It was beautfiully written.

my fav lines:

It ends the same way every time I try
And my heart keeps getting stolen

Great Read

5/5