by gack60 Oct 17, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The whistle has blown, the ball has been kicked, |
by Cella Bella
Great job with this piece. Very original, I don't think I've read anything on this sight about a sport. The rhyme and flow were wonderful. 5/5 |
by Gasttlee
^^ |
Hahaha, reminds me of playing kickball in elementry school. Great write with a good flow and structure. Keep up the great work. |
by Pete
Sweet! |