Well ..i really like your expressions and your emotions...i mean i dont quite understand it..i wish i could..bc its such a unique poem..and it seems so interesting..well i like your structure and imagery
-alicia

ReaD youR writinG witH a deeP pleasurE. writE morE anD givE uS youR betteR tidinG tO enjoyR youR expressionS witH fulL oF confidencE.... 5/5

A very eccentric piece, the choppy nature of the poem really suited to the message I believe you were trying to convey. Just a reminder to always double check your poem because we all tend to miss a simple little word here and there, but only a minor infraction. Good piece!