Heart broken

by lil ashie   Oct 17, 2007


Left in that field of bending flowers
laying on that floor for hours and hours
holding my hands on my poor black heart
my smile has been suddenly bard
head sinking beneath the cold ground
a golden key that you an me found
closing my eyes feeling that cold breeze
my hole body is about to freeze
stars looking to world below
that one wish made it all so
thinking of you leaving broke my heart
did you love me or did you not
a tear reflects from the moonlight above
what is this weird so called love
there is only one way for this token
my heart must be heart broken

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa Ann

    I love this poem... I can realate to it very well and it is writen very well!!!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Beautiful, Descriptive, Relatible.

    This peice is just excellent, your rymthes dont seem forced, the flows pretty good, and overall the content is just common.

    I sense a talent through your work.

    Keep it up.
    5/5 --Elly.

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