U must really be paying attention to the way we live..... cuz this is truly wat society is like

You have a very catchy flow throughout this poem. nice job look forward to reading more by you.

You have a very catchy flow throughout this poem. nice job look forward to reading more by you.

My best lines are the 1st and 4th lnes. the poems overall is awsum.

Good... and it's really true. and perfect..