Wow man that was wicked, the thought that went in to this piece is unreal, the structure and rhyme never miss a beat its a really good read that brought a smile to my face at the same time which can be quite hard to find.

Should win the conteset by far m8

5/5. all day long!

I LOVE THIS!! The rhyming and flow were perfect. Just the whole idea of it was phenomenal. I've never read something quite like this on here. It's my new favourite! hehe. Keep writing!! 5/5

` Liz =]

Beautiful ! It was just perfect for this time of year and it was different from what I am used to reading on this site. The descriptions you gave were so vivid, I could see the items clearly. Well done, I truly enjoyed it. *5/5*

This was truely an amazing piece. For some reason parts reminded me of Harry Potter which was interesting. I enjoy reading poems about holloween as they are always filled with so many mysterious things. Word choice great really powerful. Well done. Excellent poem. ~Mel

Reminded me of snape lol (from hp)

Loved it

WOW i never knew someone could write a poem like this! It was very entertaining and i enjoyed it...it makes me want to try it! lol great job

Haha. I love it. (:

Okay;
". . . direct to a vein." << Try; ". . . direct INTO a vein."

and make your numbers words; "2" : two.

Honestly, I absolutely loved it. I don't give 5's out much anymore. I'm more critical with them. But, this poem surely got one. It's amazingly hilarious.

I love it. (:
I didn't know what half the animals were, but it made me laugh becuse I can only imagine.
I think I'll look a few up though, they seem interesting.

Lol.
I loved the flying stanza, btw. (:

Hey this is an amazing poem it was very entertaining and i enjoyed ready every single word :) 5/5

Heyyyy, well done you got oyurp oem nominated for the bestp oem of the week, hey i am proud, nice job pete.I told you you have a brilliant talent :P

Nice. Best halloween poem I've ever read. Brilliant=)

Hahaha, a good poem, very apt for Halloween.

Oh you are so into Harry Potter! Loved it, loved it, loved it!!! Tell me, have you tried any of these? If not, I'll let you know how I get on with them. 5/5

Very good keep up the good work