From a womans eyes.

by gack60   Oct 17, 2007


As I lay watching you there by your side
i thought of the day that we met and i cried

I thought of all the promises that you made to me,
And then how all of them had not come to be

You said that you'd love me forever till death,
You changed just as quick as you caught your next breath.

You always told me that you would never marry,
As long as I'm with you, its a burden ill carry.

You promised me the world then took it back in a flash,
You think all i do is spend all of your cash.

When you proposed it knocked me off my feet,
How was I to know your feelings would deplete

One day you're happy the next day you're sad
Your inconsistency, it makes me so mad.

It saddens me to think your feelings are not sure
because ill always love you,and its you i adore

If you could just give me a clue or a sign,
That ill always be yours like you'll always be mine.

Why did you change once we had married,
As i still have the feelings i have always carried,

It would make me so happy to know that we're strong
That theres nothing in our relationship that can ever go wrong.

You're the best thing to ever walk into my life
And it makes me so happy to know I'm your wife.

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  • Aww, sad, but very good. I loved how you put the feeling in just right. The flow was amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    An excellent well written poem, so sad how couples change once they marry.

  • 17 years ago

    by gack60

    Nope this was written by me it was supposed to portray the feelings felt by my wife every day

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written. I loved the flow and the rhymes. Great work. Keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    Wicked poem mate, loved every second of it. Its hard to write a poem through someone else eyes, and you pulled it off nicely here.
    I gotta say these 2 lines blew me away .. Great wording..

    "If you could just give me a clue or a sign,
    That ill always be yours like you'll always be mine."

    Love how heavy that is.

    Another fantastic poem.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.