by gack60 Oct 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
As I lay watching you there by your side |
Aww, sad, but very good. I loved how you put the feeling in just right. The flow was amazing. 5/5 |
by Jackie
An excellent well written poem, so sad how couples change once they marry. |
by gack60
Nope this was written by me it was supposed to portray the feelings felt by my wife every day |
Very nicely written. I loved the flow and the rhymes. Great work. Keep it up. |
by Pete
Wicked poem mate, loved every second of it. Its hard to write a poem through someone else eyes, and you pulled it off nicely here. |