Wicked poem mate, loved every second of it. Its hard to write a poem through someone else eyes, and you pulled it off nicely here.
I gotta say these 2 lines blew me away .. Great wording..

"If you could just give me a clue or a sign,
That ill always be yours like you'll always be mine."

Love how heavy that is.

Another fantastic poem.
[5/5]
~Pete.

Very nicely written. I loved the flow and the rhymes. Great work. Keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Nope this was written by me it was supposed to portray the feelings felt by my wife every day

An excellent well written poem, so sad how couples change once they marry.

Aww, sad, but very good. I loved how you put the feeling in just right. The flow was amazing. 5/5

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