Comments : I've Gone To Find Myself

  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Different. Nice style to it. I like the raging ocean metaphor. It has some iffy rhymes in it, like am and dim, but it's close enough, and I use lots of those in my own poetry...otherwise it can come out too forced.
    Nice!
    *ME*

  • 17 years ago

    by A Victim of Fate

    Thanks you guys. xD I love the poem because it talks about finding yourself.