Then I Saw You

by Daniel Milano   Oct 17, 2007


Love at first sight,
Was just a myth to me,
But then i saw you,
and my doubts became mysteries.

I had to meet you,
Because you were so perfect,
Falling in love was no accident,
Destiny did it on purpose.

Just the way you spoke,
Made my heart so warm,
Just seeing your smile,
Is like a rainbow after a storm.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This was very lovely. I loved the concept of it and the loving emotion in it, but I think the flow was a little rocky. You also have a few punctuation errors, but the imagery was beautiful. I believe that you should reworded a bit to tighten up the flow, but the rest is wonderful. Great job!

    Letty

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