by Brittney Follett Oct 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Grabbing my hand and kissing my cheek, |
by Shinobi
Very deep poem. You talk about different kind of little things. The little things that makes you mad, the little things that makes you love... Liked how you connected the ideas to the concept. The rhymes were fine and flow went on smoothly. Nice job 5/5 |