by Kaila Oct 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I know there is no such thing as love as far as the eye can see, |
by TracyM
Wow, I LOVE this poem, flows so beautifully and the word choice is awesome too, I couldnt take my eyes away. Beautifully written, and it flows really well. Keep writing!! |
by Blissful
Oh my this was so deep and just touched me. I loved the repitition, it really got your message across. I love how you adressed the cliches movies talk about and how you fit in the way he makes you feel. Well done *5/5* |
by Sweet lig
Hmm I KNOW this is so true.. i love ur style... this i very marvelous work.. i really enjoyed the way u keep repeating the words... love it 5/5 |
Wow this poem is so true. straight to the point. the flow was excellent. it kept my intrests through the whole thing |
Good poem, but it had too much repetition of the same word. It's a good poem though. There were a couple of grammar errors. Good job. 4/5 |