I loved this one..
was absoultely breathtaking
keep it up ian,u shouldn't gve up writing with a talent this good
take care:)

O my god this is...... i cant even explain it this is the best poem i have ever red in my intir life i cried just reading it please dont through ur amazing talent away just like that.

Awww what an awesome piece- seriously don't stop writing and waste such an amazing talent, it's great stuff!!!
5/5 x

Wow..this was reallyy well donee ! great piecee

and thnks for the comment on mine :)

5/5

5 its wn amazing poem i loved it

Cute poem!!