by ECILA ice Oct 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I've been poisoned |
by Abu3li
Speechless |
by Teria
Well, it is short, very short. |
Powerful words in such a small package...great write...A good lesson to all who read it...valid and easily memorable point. 5/5 |
by Melpomene
This poem, Wow, I can't express how much I loved it. It was short yet so beautifully written because of how it really it. The meaning you portrayed was honest. So much power was expressed here from such small amount of words. Well done. An amazing read. Keep up the great work. ~mel |
by awww
Four lines... within those lines you portrayed a valuable lesson.. and since its so short some would read it over and over until they consciously or unconsciously have internalized it.. good job there |