Wow... deep, powerful and truly excellently written. You said so much with just four lines, and that's truly impressive. I can relate to this piece.
Amazing poem!
Keep writing!

Such power in so few words. Great job!!

Very short yet extremly powerful you rite it in a way that made me acctually believe in the words written great job

This is very deep and you said so much with just four lines... I am absolutely IMPRESSED! Well done, you left me without words, wow... Amazing piece of poetry, so short but yet powerful and actually you described and expressed everything with few words. It has excellent flow and every line is written greatly. Well done, you should be proud on this.

This is very short, but yet has a lot of emotion in it all at once.. very nice work

Four lines... within those lines you portrayed a valuable lesson.. and since its so short some would read it over and over until they consciously or unconsciously have internalized it.. good job there

~angel~

This poem, Wow, I can't express how much I loved it. It was short yet so beautifully written because of how it really it. The meaning you portrayed was honest. So much power was expressed here from such small amount of words. Well done. An amazing read. Keep up the great work. ~mel

Powerful words in such a small package...great write...A good lesson to all who read it...valid and easily memorable point. 5/5

Well, it is short, very short.
But, it's amazing.
Completely true.
I'm actually quite fond of it.

I don't really know what to say.
it's just, flawless.

Lol.
5|5

Speechless

just 1 stanza conveyed it all

5/5