by Brian Hwang Oct 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Once up a time, |
by Kaila
This poem was okay. Not your best. But it did have some good qualities I loved how you described everything about blue moon sanfransico so parts were a little confusing but it was okay |
by Gasttlee
This is so relaxing and makes me wish I was in San Francisco. lol But seriously, the way you wrote this was beautiful! 5/5 |