by JustKristina Oct 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
All She has to say |
This poem really touched me. I hope this really isn't the way you live. If so, please tell someone, nobody should have to live with such abuse. I was there once myself, but I am older and wiser now. |
I am really loving your poems. They are amazing.. |
by Men
It's a good poem but it was also quite lengthy however it took me a while to understand fully overall it was a great piece of work 4/5 good job! |
by abcede
Umm yea that was really awesome and intense!!! i loved it!!! OOMMGG!!!! even though it didn't rhyme or flow like perfectly well or whatever, the whole idea of what you were saying really shined through the diction!! 5/5 - you hit this one on the head of a nail |
by xxSuicidalxx
Beautifully written poem...very full of emotion and sad and lonely. Great details and imagery! Keep up the good work! |