Wow, the words just roll along , flowing like a waterfall with no limit, I loved the rhymes, they fit perfectly. great piece of work. Timothy r

Ok, I thought I asked you not to be so good....your making everyone else look bad with your great work. I mean this is like book worthy, way to blow everyone else out of the water...

Ohhh how i loved this! i found this to be both original and unique in concept, beautifully written and very powerful intense. coupled with a perfect flow and stunning imagery, all of this comes together to create a beautiful read. just beautiful!

This poem is simply amazing!!! WOW! I love every part of it, so unique and you really should be proud on the way that you wrote it. Idea of this piece is excellent and every line is written and filed with such power!

-Aesthetic collages painted empty street
dragon's breath melted masks with alluring heat
yet my being was shattered, drowned in effete
playing broken tunes within every beat.-
^This stanza is sooo impressing!
I absolutely love the rhythm of this one, so deep and creative. It has so effective words and flow is outstanding. Well done, this poem is just breathtaking.

Omg i Loved your Poem :)

Wow, excellent poem. Rhyming every line like that is really difficult, yet you pulled it off without it reading as forced at all. The flow was flawless, and your vocab made great description. I love the last two lines, especially the last, it really summed it up nicely. A great read. 5/5

Tammie

Very good, the imagery was excellent, and the and the lines were full with meaning. The ending was superb it was strong and not sudden. Excellent job. Definite 5/5

The poem has real good flow and the images were good I liked it alot I gave it a 5 Plot121

WOW!!!!! u totally pulled the reader into it.. it wz just amazing.. the rhyming.. every wrd.. so powerfull..each wrd u express here contains so much... it runsss ssoo deep.. i love the way u expressed ur self in this... gr8 wrkkkk

Wow!!

Gotta love it!

I absolutely loved this piece as you could probably tell from my poem I'm a fan I'm rhyming and you did a fantastic job. I believe the great writers can make a poem just as great with rhyming words as others can without. Excelent job 5/5 GG23

Wow cool i love it the rhyming is just great.

keep it up

Yet again, such an amazingly written piece by you. the atmosphere you created was so very dark deep and eerie. I love your word choice as always they manage to take my breath away. You pick words that are not used in everyday speech which is what makes your words so great. Loved each line. You know i'm such a big fan of your work. Keep on writing so I can keep on reading. ~Mel

Wow i usually dont like reading dark poems, but this is really wow 5/5 keep it up

You are an amazing poet. This poem made me smile because it was so amazing. Thank you for sharing your work on this site. I'll defanitely be reading more of your work. 5/5

Ravyn

You are astonishing. I will keep reading more or your work. Its executed as though it was effortless. Well done.

Excellent!!!! You're such a poetess

Brilliant poem, really. "Aestetic collages painted on empty street." What a glorious line! It's like instead of merely writing, your painting the imagination with words. That is a pure talent, friend. Great piece!

p.s. what does effete mean?

Loved it! Very dark, haunting and addicting to read. I think the flow in this one isnt as flawless as what I've read from you before but it still didnt affect the poem for me because the imagery was right on as always and so was your vocabulary. It is so refreshing to read something different on this site besides the same old same and your poems are that for me .. a breath of fresh air. They take me to different places each time and this one just left me in awe. Very strong and powerful .. I enjoyed reading.

Well done *5/5*