Deaf Dumb Blind

by Illusion   Oct 18, 2007


War has raised its ugly head
Green ragged men on their way
The son of the gun kick starts a dismal situation
Don't curse him.
He is just a puppet in the hands of THE MASTER.

Families cry
Soldiers die

Some shed tears in their name
And the deaf dumb blind hardly care

The deafening silence after the violence
We cant stop the war
You win...you win
But humanity loses its home
Mother earth embraces hope

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  • 17 years ago

    by lil ashie

    Well done this is true and it came from the heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by rdn 11 2 08

    Luv it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Good
    I just still think that the stanzas could be put together more evenly. I'm just weird about that.lol
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Hmm well I do like the idea of mocking war its kind of one of my favourites... And you do make a veeeryyyy good point...

    So as for the poem and message its excellent but I would recomend you to work on the flow and rhyming a litle bit...

    Anyways just an opinion... great work =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much

    What u mean?

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