Comments : Deaf Dumb Blind

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I liked it. I especially like the idea because it's the truth. I just don't personally think the title necessarily fits.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    So...I don't remember reading the poem you mentioned...HOWEVER...I apologize now I did!!

    This poem is quite frankly...BEAUTIFUL! I love it! Hope LIVES ON DAMN IT!

    So who the deaf fumb and blind? BUSH?!?!? HAHAHAHAHA Ok so that was mean...Lord I apologize...I Love this piece...nicely done my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    This poem was awesome man, great job, spoke truth and wisdom. great work, check out my protest poem. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by S0u10fS0rr0w

    Tis a good poem, sad that the war still continues, i give this a 5/5!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Umm...some parts were really good and otheres were a little bit off for me but I think you still put in nice effort 4/5

  • What u mean?

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Hmm well I do like the idea of mocking war its kind of one of my favourites... And you do make a veeeryyyy good point...

    So as for the poem and message its excellent but I would recomend you to work on the flow and rhyming a litle bit...

    Anyways just an opinion... great work =)

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Good
    I just still think that the stanzas could be put together more evenly. I'm just weird about that.lol
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by rdn 11 2 08

    Luv it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lil ashie

    Well done this is true and it came from the heart.