I liked it. I especially like the idea because it's the truth. I just don't personally think the title necessarily fits.

So...I don't remember reading the poem you mentioned...HOWEVER...I apologize now I did!!

This poem is quite frankly...BEAUTIFUL! I love it! Hope LIVES ON DAMN IT!

So who the deaf fumb and blind? BUSH?!?!? HAHAHAHAHA Ok so that was mean...Lord I apologize...I Love this piece...nicely done my friend.

This poem was awesome man, great job, spoke truth and wisdom. great work, check out my protest poem. =)

Tis a good poem, sad that the war still continues, i give this a 5/5!!!!

Umm...some parts were really good and otheres were a little bit off for me but I think you still put in nice effort 4/5

What u mean?

Hmm well I do like the idea of mocking war its kind of one of my favourites... And you do make a veeeryyyy good point...

So as for the poem and message its excellent but I would recomend you to work on the flow and rhyming a litle bit...

Anyways just an opinion... great work =)

Good
I just still think that the stanzas could be put together more evenly. I'm just weird about that.lol
Good job.

Luv it 5/5

Well done this is true and it came from the heart.