I love how you personalized it yet kept it general, allowing others to relate easier! It really touched deep with me, especially the last three lines- I totally get what you mean by letting go but not letting go.

Wow your really good! this made me think of my ex who i was engaged to for a year and a half. he never said i love you or anything but i knew it was there

Awesome. Loved reading it. Beautiful flow and so complete.

I like this poem. and it is similar to mine. I like the last words in it.
"Then I set you free, Never letting go"

ah..so true haha
nice writing